I bask in the memory of those orange afternoons when the tires run smoothly on a sun-kissed asphalt. My heart just stared blankly at everything, unabashed, silent and roaring.
- Kimmy Bureros, 1996

Unreal

September 10, 2007

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           The quixotic storm has started murmuring  its delirious litany. Or so she seemed.

           You worry me. Inch by lurid inch. Like some batty word might change what we think we share.

           Every minim seemed harrowingly vapid these past two decades for me. When you came, with your dauntless guise you lit up my dinky unnoticed with a blinding fire that burned my clueless supine heart to ashes. 

           Mad. Every single word had to matter. Fidgeting pensively whether to some extent I grew nakedly too gay, too scary. Too freaky. Or just too much. With you.

           Perhaps this heart is too eager to faint if I'd scare you away. More honestly, there might be that fear of losing you. Don't ask me why. I can't quite grasp it either. It drives me deadmad every time I try to dig out a reason that I can follow with this ridiculously newfangled paroxysm. 

           You keep me ending up crippled of sense. Tell me something candid; because this nameless faceless commotion that's squeezing my glitched up heart out is too powerful to be unreal

 

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Previous Comments

whoa! what a writer. have you considered a career in literature?

Posted by J at September 12, 2007, 9:27 am

whoa! (you can’t be serious, j). but thanks! ;)
so how do i make you my best friend? will there be an initiation of sort? should i bring fried cookies, toasted chocolates and baked juice? or would my toothy grin be enough for a friendship of frying funs? lol.

Posted by coriander at September 12, 2007, 4:41 pm

im not an indian chieftain. you dont need to offer tributes to befriend me.

well, for starters im a big nerd. you mind having a geeky friend? hahaha.

you seem to be cool. maybe we can meet once i get back to manila next month? :D

hey, i posted another creepy story on the comment page of my blog post called “creepy”. maybe you can check it out :D

see you around.

Posted by J at September 13, 2007, 8:02 pm

i’d love to have a geeky friend. lol. i’ve got tons of geeky friends, so. :)

“seem” to be cool. that’s why seem is a word. lol. cool and me - they don’t lap over.

and i’d love to meet you, but i’m not in manila now. and i don’t think i’ll be there next month. sadly. :(

can i add you in msn, though? :D

Posted by coriander at September 14, 2007, 1:50 pm

oh. thats sad. not in manila? where from, then?

too bad i dont have msn account. what about yahoo?

any plans of goin to manila?

Posted by j at September 14, 2007, 5:24 pm

i’ve been meaning to visit manila. i don’t know when, though. i’m in cebu now. ^^

i have a yahoo account. :D so this means i can bug you when i find a good rift in time. and also, if you’re buggable. lol

Posted by coriander at September 16, 2007, 9:56 am

cebu is a great place. been meaning to visit too, but don`t have the $$$$.

my ym id id: jdomingo7772004

see you around :D

Posted by J at September 17, 2007, 7:55 pm

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